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Wednesday, March 14

  1. page You Are Me edited ... This poem has simile because it says"Shining bright like the sun." The poem has enj…
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    This poem has simile because it says"Shining bright like the sun."
    The poem has enjambment because it continues a sentence to another line.
    Another great poem....you should send this in the Teen Ink! More analysis needed! B

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    8:10 pm
  2. page The Negro Speaks Of Rivers edited ... The poem has personification because a dawn cannot be young. It repeats "My soul has gro…
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    The poem has personification because a dawn cannot be young.
    It repeats "My soul has grown deep like the rivers," so it has repitition.
    More analysis needed....no explanation of deeper meaning....C

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    8:08 pm
  3. page The Crazy Woman edited ... " A May song should be gay." Also "And sing a song of gray." It has littl…
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    " A May song should be gay." Also "And sing a song of gray."
    It has little repetition because it repeats " I'll wait until November."
    More analysis needed....no explanation of the deeper meaning of the poem.....C
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    8:07 pm
  4. page Because Of You edited ... The song has consonance in the first verse. It keeps repeating the M sound. In the chorus it k…
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    The song has consonance in the first verse. It keeps repeating the M sound. In the chorus it keeps repeating the Y sound.
    In the second verse it repeats the L sound. The third verse has the long i sound.
    The "i" sound would be assonance
    More analysis ...... B-

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    8:05 pm
  5. page Music edited ... The poem has a simile. " You are stuck in my head, like gum to a sidewalk." The poe…
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    The poem has a simile. " You are stuck in my head, like gum to a sidewalk."
    The poem has personification because ears cant love something.
    This is a well-written poem....I like it!
    You needed to analyze it more.........B

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    8:03 pm
  6. page Jar Of Hearts edited ... The song repeats the entire chorus so it has repitition. The song has external rhyme. Tell …
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    The song repeats the entire chorus so it has repitition.
    The song has external rhyme.
    Tell where the external rhyme is....B

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    8:01 pm

Wednesday, February 22

  1. page You Are Me edited ... They can live without the other person its just that they dont want to. This poem has simile …
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    They can live without the other person its just that they dont want to.
    This poem has simile because it says"Shining bright like the sun."
    The rhyme scheme is ABCDEFGHGIJG.
    The poem has enjambment because it continues a sentence to another line.
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    5:15 am
  2. page Because Of You edited ... This song has repetition because it repeats the line "Because of you." and "I n…
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    This song has repetition because it repeats the line "Because of you." and "I never stray to far from the sidewalk."
    and "I learned to play on the safe side so I don't get hurt." The song keeps repeating the chorus.
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    someone else.
    The song has consonance in the first verse. It keeps repeating the M sound. In the chorus it keeps repeating the Y sound.
    In the second verse it repeats the L sound. The third verse has the long i sound.
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    5:14 am
  3. page You Are Me edited ... They can live without the other person its just that they dont want to. This poem has simile …
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    They can live without the other person its just that they dont want to.
    This poem has simile because it says"Shining bright like the sun."
    The rhyme scheme is ABCDEFGHGIJG.
    The poem has enjambment because it continues a sentence to another line.

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    5:13 am
  4. page You Are Me edited ... I am you and, You are me. To me this poem means that someone loves someone else alot and th…
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    I am you and,
    You are me.
    To me this poem means that someone loves someone else alot and they think that they cannot live without that other person.
    They can live without the other person its just that they dont want to.

    This poem has simile because it says"Shining bright like the sun."
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    5:08 am

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